A&P Show

 Last week our class had to do an A & P Show presentation. We had to pick some activities and I picked My Food Truck and the food is Hot chips burger fish&chips and chips in burger.

When  we went to the A&P show we were lucky to see Bill English and we had our photo taken with him.

The Oceanmaker

The Story set is in the desert the man was sad, I was flying and I saw boats the plane was going down the man was thinking about what's going to happen. the man saw a lighthouse and the lighthouse was flashing in the man eyes and he was rubbing his eyes there was people in the lighthouse and then,  the man save the people so the man was happy that he save the people so the people was happy.

The plane was going down so everyone was screaming then the man no what to do he was trying to fix it but then the plane was smoking and it was a bad one so he telled everyone that the plane was going down so the man fixed the plane and he was happy and the people was happy with him at the end but then he died.

We watch some of the movie and the I done a plan and then I done the writing of the story so can I have some feedback.

yesterday we had to do a nariative writing here is the video that you can watch enjoy.