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Helllo, everyone welcome back to another blog post today I'm going to share you my. Long Write what we did today I got 369 word's for my word count. It is about this Big blue Path of Flowers on the ground we have to use our. Sense for this Long write like Taste and Hear and Sight so I am going to show you blog post. I have to work on is alliteration and personification so I need to work on those two Next time. Have you had any Long write's? If you do leave it in the comment's. Be sure to Write a positive and a thoughtful Comment bye.



(Long Write)


It was a grate day with all the colors on the ground, It was all blue and colorful I was smiling all the Flowers on the ground, and I sighted all the flowers it was like a magic place because it fell like it was a dream. I hear all the wind blowing all the flowers out of no where. While I was walking through the Path of Flowers I fell Like it was a peaceful place where we can sit and Talk I  saw a nice blue Flower on the ground so I picked it up and it was Nice The Location of this Nice blue path of Flowers it was at this Magical place where it is like water but it is just. Flowers all a round there was wind blowing from this machine that is like a wind Machine. I was wording What well happen if it was like turn on it might. Blow all the flowers in the air so I was Wording I should tell someone about this place. But I said No to my selff After that the wind Machine turned on and blowed all the flowers. Away but they did not go anywhere but just on the ground so that was lucky that this place of Flowers was like magic because. The wind did not BLow all the flowers all way. The Sun was out with the flowers and I sighted this Big house so I walked in to that place. It was like this flower bed. Where you can look at theses types of flowers in this big Glasse House, It was cool so I walked out and all the flowers were gone so I was thinking what happen to theses flowers. No one noes about this place but then there was a note. It was like to make the flowers come back you need to say this magic word to make theses flowers come back. It was Come back in to this Magic World of Blue water Flowers so I said it. Then the Flowers come back I was like this is amazing. After that I went home and that was the end of this magical place. The end,