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Wednesday, September 11, 2019

Jamie and the Magic Lamp.

Hello, everyone welcome back to another blog post yesterday on tuesday. We had to do a long write about Jamie and the magic lamp we watched a video about it. And there was a slide to pick a first person recount or a diary about Jaime and the magic lamp. First we had to do a plan about what should we write about I am going to show you my long write. The Word count I got was 606 words I well give you a hint in my long write. It had to be a first person recount for Jamie and the Magic Lamp. The Video for it it has a dog named WordsWorth and the boys name is  Jamie.  In the start of it the mom said you have to go to bed and the boy did not listen. So they bringed the Magic torch and Turned it on I hope you guys well enjoy this blog post be sure to write a positive and a thoughtful comment,  Bye


                                                                 (Long Write)
Once upon a time there was a light with a torch. And when Jamie was sleeping the mom said that you can’t stay up. So when her mom left the room Jamie got out of his bed and started to go to the torch. With wordsWorth and they were looking at it. And they turned it on and played with it while he was playing he was like Got teleported to cuckooland and they were going to. That place there was a huge slide that they both Went all around the slide tell they got to the bottom. They were so dizzy that the dog trip over to this place and when they got there. They were exploring this place because there mom said that you can’t go to Cuckooland. But they both went anyway so while they were looking at this slide they thought that how did they make that slide in the first place. While they were thinking they thought some Magic thing came along with the torch and made that slide. To get teleported so they were looking around the slide and they found another slide but it looked like the same slide. From before but then the dog was still dizzy while they went down that slide in the first place. Jamie thought that how would they get back to there bedroom. So they were thinking of a way to get back to there place. So the Mom won’t find out when they get back because there mom might get worried for them. They thought that they could have a little fun before they get back. They were running around the hole place and around the slide. And they thought where were the people in the place so they were walking around the hole place. To try and find them because if there is no people in this magic place then it is only them who can. Access the place so they were trying to find a way back so they don't try and do anything. They found this Magic Map that they were found under the slide in the first place. When they looked at it they saw this weird map with a torch with it but it was a picture. They were trying to find this Torch to get back.


While they were looking they found this person named Paul. But he was not talking while we found this we talking and he was going to speak while.  He was giving some Information about where was the torch he said the only way to get it. Is to say the Magic song so he singed Jamie Jamie And the Magic Lamp while Paul saw them singing . They gave Jamie the Lamp and they were happy that they got the magic lamp but. Then they don’t know what to do with it when they turned around the guy was gone. But he left something on the ground while they were gone. Jamie picked it up and showed Woodsworth the thing what they found on the ground. The Dog sniffed it up and he was running to this place. And they found another map that said the only way to work it was to. Say Jamie Jamie and the Magic Lamp 2 times. And they said it while they found it they got teleported back to there place. And they quickly went back to sleep and then there mom came in to there room. To cheek up on them so they were still sleeping so that was the end of this Jamie and the magic Lamp. The end of the story,


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