Traditional Tales. 😀

Hello, everyone welcome back to another blog post today I'm going to show you my Traditional Tales. Yesterday we did another Traditional Tales and we had to present. A Traditional tales. And we had to be in our editing partners to do it we got Cards and we had to make it up. And show it to the class after that we had to do a plan for our writing it had to be 40 min to write it. I picked the 3 little pigs For my Traditional Tales Workbook so I am going to show you my writing. For my word count it is 854 words what I got so I am going to show you it. Be sure to write a positive and a thoughtful comment and tell me what should I improve on in my writing? Bye.

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Once upon a time there was 3 little pigs that was walking down the big green filed trying to looks for food. While they were trying to find some food some witch came a long and said. I well turn you in to bacon while the pigs were scared the witch said. I well turn you in to bacon so the 1st pig was turned in to bacon and they had to run to there house, and destroy there house the first little pig’s house was made out of bricks. And the second pig’s house was made out of Wood and the witch tried to destroy there own house. So the witch destroyed the wood house and the sticks house and then the final house was the brick house, and the witch tried to use her Power to brake it but she can’t and then the pigs, quickly ran in to the brick house. And taken cover because the witch can’t get in to the brick house so while they try to stay calm. The witch said Phrase to the little pigs house and it was I well huff and huff and I well destroy your house down.

The 3 little pigs was scared because the witch tried to brake it the witch got a grate Idea. To foll the pigs the witch transfer in to a Pizza Laddy and Bang on there door. Then the pigs said Who is it the Pizza Lady said It is me you ordered Pizza. When the pigs peeped through the window they saw dark hair that means that is the Witch trying to foll us again. While they were trying to see what do to next the witch said, I’m going to grab the big wolf that well destroy your brick house down. So the Witch teleported the Wolf in the 3 little pigs house After a while the 3 little pigs thought that the Witch is Lying. About getting the wolf but the witch is NOT the wolf was here.

The Wolf was wearing a Cap over its head and a band around is arm. And the wolf said I well huff and Puff and Blow your house down while the wolf blowed the house. It did nothing so the wolf tried to get the 3 little pigs out of the house so the Wolf got a good Idea is to try and. Get on top and go down the Pipe but when he got down the pipe. He got stuck half way but when the 3 little pigs looked up the pipe they decide to get a torch to fling him out of the pipe. After that the 3 little pigs was safe tell then the witch came in and then she stranded on something that teleported her back to the place. Where she belong the the 3 little pigs were safe now and the bad guys were gone. But they were trying to figure out house did the teleport here in the first place. So they were thinking they left something on the ground so they were reading the old paper. And they found some words that says the only place that how the got here is a very old teleportation machine.

That is how they got here in the first place so they needed to burn this paper. So the don’t have to see them ever again while they were trying to find something to burn it with. They found the Arm band that the wolf had on him so they have to burn that to in there fire place. So the Turned on there fire and then they started to put them in the fire place while they found the burn marks inside the pipe.

 From the Wolf that got stuck up there so while they Burned that they went out side and found some hay in a pot to eat, they were happy that happened at the end they rebuild their houses once again the houses are bricks sticks and wood. After a wee while they were going to find some food out in the barn area so they can eat because it was a bad day, and they had to get rid of there bad people because the witch came along and then the Wolf came along and try and destroy there houses.

So you are wording why they were destroying the 3 little pigs houses because the bad wolf is the bad person in the story. In the 3 little pigs so they were Lucky there were trying to get the Wolf because they blowed the wolf up in the air. And never seen the wolf ever again so that was a close call because the wolf was allmos in there house again. But at least they got the bad people out of there house. So at the end of the story they headed back in to there houses and went to sleep. So the happy ending is that the pigs got the Bad guys out of there house. The end of the story Happily ever after.